Well. I feel like I don’t really know what to write here so for now I am just going write.

I found a lot of interesting work on-line. I really enjoyed the piece “The Moment” by Dean Gransar. http://storiesforchange.net/story/the_moment This piece really struck me. I think it is his use of music, voice and images that really make his story feel like it could be my story too. This story inspires me not only because it uses different mediums so effectively but also because people wantto hear Dean Gransar’s story. Maybe people would want to listen to what I have to say too.

So I kept what I did in class today but wanted to expand on it. I used two other photos and while I was tempted to write new lines for them I decided to force myself to only use words or phrases that I wrote in class today. So i took parts of sentences and put them together. I think this story now better conveys what I was trying to do in the first place.